Well for never having written a poem.. this goes beyond
'Beginners Luck'. Your poem is excellent :lol

Emotion is a great 'Mover and Shaker'... eh?

You should visit Poetry.com Such Fun! It has grown tremendously since I started writing poetry there.. three years ago. There are several different poetry participation programs. Some even offer cash prizes. Whether you enter to win or just for the pleasure of writing.. I encourage you to try it. Your words have Truthful eloquence.. well done:lol


Follow Your Heart:rollin
Patturns